PRESENT CONTINUOUS TENSE
PAST SIMPLE VS PAST CONTINUOUS
PRESENT CONTINUOUS TENSE
PAST SIMPLE VS PAST CONTINUOUS
For example:
She ran quickly to school.
James realised he had forgotten his homework so he walked quickly back to the house.
Despite wind and rain, Peter and Mary wanted to stay outside.
PARENTHETICAL PHRASES
WHAT ARE PARENTHETICAL PHRASES?
Essential: The man in the red and grey T-shirt is a video game designer.
Nonessential: The detectives, hoping to catch the criminal before he escaped, took a shortcut through the park.
But without giving any spoilers or revealing plot twists! As a general rule, try to avoid writing in detail about anything that happens from about the middle of the book onwards. If the book is part of a series, it can be useful to mention this, and whether you think you'd need to have read other books in the series to enjoy this one.
Focus on your thoughts and feelings about the story and the way it was told. You could try answering a couple of the following questions:
Talk about why you think it didn't work for you. For example:
Summarise some of your thoughts on the book by suggesting the type of reader you'd recommend the book to. For example: younger readers, older readers, fans of relationship drama/mystery stories/comedy. Are there any books or series you would compare it to?